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[MMD] Work Bitch (fem!noiz)

Published: Oct 6, 2014

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www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2jNGY…

so...i finally finished the beta test of SiberiaKanoko's fem!noiz model i was supposed to do over a week ago
_ _lll
~~i actually did it Friday but rendering and uploading...~~

(i totally wouldve done S&M if i literally didn't make a vid with that song last week...so here we are
this song should work XD)
this video actually turned out really nice! the combo of effects worked out pretty well...

hm...so credits...
motion by moltolitton
cam by iriko635
lipsync by atora9

stage by KasugaKaoru
model by SiberiaKanoko ...as i already said...

effects!
AbsoluteShadow (which i'm pretty sure doesnt work..since i dont see it doing anything...eh whatever i forgot to delete it before i rendered so)
BeamMan_DOF
SSAO
Tonemap_v2
o_Bleach-bypass
CheapLens
G_Shader 08_MOON

right...about the glitches...
i already mentioned most of them but...
~~hope you dont mind my suggestions...~~
as you can see the hair goes through a lot of things...like her body...and her hat...
i see you're using Kuroyu's which have awesome physics...but it's the one from TriOxygen Luka and its physics are probably super complicated and impossible to edit ^^"
so...i'd actually suggest changing the back hair completely? ~~personally i think femnoiz would have short hair but u can ignore me haha~~
the skirt goes through the legs a lot, and even the shirt...that shouldn't be too hard to fix ~~but i know nothing about how physics actually work so maybe not~~
didn't notice any rigging issues...
but textures...her face especially...parts of is are super red like her chin and near her lips...looks like it might be a toon?
oh and the texture doesn't match the neck...i feel like the base didn't originally have this head (it's not aligned properly either)
the face in general just bugs me

i feel like you should use something younger (she is the youngest of the main dmmd chars...) with thinner eyelashes...this is probably me being pushy sorry...
you could also rename her facials if you have the time...and i don't think some even do anything so you could delete them...

OH YEAH AND I LOVE HER NAILS

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Shadow-Riri

Jun 16, 2015

oh no, i wanted to watch the vid and see female noiz move her ass. but then i get this:

"This video contains content from SME, who has blocked it in your country on copyright grounds."